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Davao, Palawan, Cagayan de Oro

Hiyes! Nakarating na rin ako ng CDO!

Jette and I took a Trans-Asia vessel (the M/V Asia China) from Cebu to Cagayan de Oro last Saturday. We’ll be staying until tomorrow, then we’re off to Camiguin.

Sunday, March 28:
Checked in at Mass-Specc Hostel, showered and fixed up before we headed over to Limketkai Mall to meet up with Carla Giopaolo and the rest of the PETA Marketing Team. Jette had coffee and cake at Coffee Works before the others arrived, then we had lunch at Bigby’s. Masarap ‘yung baja wrap nila.

Jette and I stayed longer because we were supposed to meet up with Hannah Wabe, so we went to Robinson’s and found a Phil Post station. Very helpful. We looked for a National Bookstore so I can get a CDO postcard for Kat. We also finally got to meet up with Hannah but we were only able to chat a bit and take pictures before she had to go again. We went grocery shopping, then back to the hotel.

And since it was Palm Sunday, Jette and I went to hear mass at the San Agustin Metropolitan Cathedral. The mass was in Bisaya, so I had a hard time listening to the homily, but I said my responses and sang hymns in English. As usual, nag-iiyak na naman ako after communion. The gist of my thank-you prayer is: “Lord, thank you sa walang sawang pagpapakita sa ‘kin na mahal mo ako.”

Monday, March 29:
We stayed at the hotel the whole morning because we didn’t need to look for a whitewater rafting office. The friendly guard at the front desk made the reservations for us. Ang galing ng initiative ni manong, promise. Kanina lang, hindi pa ako nakaka-akyat ng hagdan papunta sa front desk, inaabot na niya sa ‘kin ‘yong susi ng room namin hehe We also had (free) breakfast at the hotel.

In the afternoon, we went to Opol Aviary and Mini Zoo. There was a medium-sized crocodile sunning itself in a shallow pond. Sabi ko pulis, sabi ni Jette, senador daw. There were two monkeys, an albino python and a collection of birds. My favorite is this huge bird, I forget what its called, but it’s a type of huge pheasant, and it was so “malambing”. When one of the caretakers went near its cage, it hopped closer and presented its neck then started rubbing its head against the bars. I got to touch it too, and it was so sweet. I also got to touch a real deer, and a -ugh!- snake!

I said I’ve always wanted to touch a snake just so I could cross it off my list, so when the caretaker said that they also had a snake, I blinked and said “bring it on”. And he brought it on. It felt like a bag ahehe it was cold and scaly, but it was firmer than I thought it would be so naisip ko baka nag-gi-gym siya or something. Takot lang talaga ako kasi the guy put it around my neck and it started to curl. Naisip ko baka bigla na lang akong lingkisin, ay sos! Wala nang Elise. After the visit, we went to SM City Cagayan de Oro to get baon for our whitewater rafting trip, and so I can get add a pic to my collection of SM City pics.

Malambing na ibon at Opol Aviary

Deer!

Tuesday, March 30:
Nagising ako ng isang masamang panaginip. Hinihila raw ni Jean Mae Oryza ang paa ko, and ta-dah! Hindi pala siya nightmare. Totoo pala siya. Hahaha Joke lang, H!

Jette and I prepared for our rafting trip. We went with 1st Rafting Adventure, which was apt because it was my 1st rafting adventure. I love the water, and I know I love the water, but rafting was different from riding the boat from Cebu to CDO, or even from Apo back to Zamboanguita. I mean, we’re going to go through rapids. I told Jette that I wish that the scariest part was having to sign the waiver asking me for my blood type. You know, just in case.

We rode a jeep from the city to the starting point somewhere in Cagayan de Oro river which is a narrow river that runs right smack between Cagayan de Oro and Bukidnon. Sana pala bumaba ako do’n sa Bukidnon side para nasabi ko na ring nakarating na ako ng Bukidnon. One of the guides, Jun, briefed us on what we had to do (paddle forward, backward and stop) before we got into our rubber boat. We joined a group of pastors touring the Philippines to do catechism work. They’re such fun! Anyway, about three minutes into the trip I knew I was going to enjoy myself. It was water and I was on a boat, and it made me wish I wasn’t near-sighted and I was taller so I could have entered the PMA and joined the Navy.

The water level was low, probably because it was the summer, and there was El Nino but the rapids were there, nonetheless. We went through 14 rapids in 12+ kilometers. Hindi nga lang sila ganon kalakas. Our guide, I also forgot his name, told bad jokes which we laughed at because they were that bad, and the guys we joined were hilarious. He’d splash us with water every now and then kasi mainit daw sa ilalim no’ng life vest. Amazed din ako do’n sa photographer. He’s such an affable guy, at ang lakas ng upper body niya ha! He was riding in this rubber canoe going back and forth, back and forth taking pictures of everyone at ang bilis magsagwan ni kuya.

A part of Cagayan de Oro River

Aside from the company, the view was gorgeous. There were parts that made me think I was in Jurassic Park, and there were parts were there were only trees. But when you see the cliffs din and the river running between them… ang gan-da. There was also what they called a Snake Wall where – duh – snakes lived. We saw a green one wrapped around a limb. Sorry, I really don’t like snakes *shudder*

When I come back to CDO, magra-rafting ulit ako, pramis.

We went back to the hotel at around 3 then we went to McDo for a really late lunch. Gising na si H no’n, awa ng Diyos. Inabutan siya ng rotating brown out na mag-isa sa hotel bwahahahey. Then back at the hotel ulit. H read a book. Jette finished Armand, and I did my oDesk work. Then when Jette was done with her second Xenaki, I loaded it to my phone so I can read it there, and H read from Cedric. I really love Armand :) I think I love him more than Ken na.

Today, March 31:
I was too exhausted, not only because of the rafting but probably because of all the traveling so I opted not to go to Bukidnon. I just went out to get Filet-O-Fish for lunch, then went back to the hotel to wait for power to come back up. Sayang sana because I wanted to try the zipline in Bukidnon which is the longest zipline in Asia, but I could feel a fever building, and I didn’t want to ruin Camiguin by being sick there instead of resting now. So I took a shot of Biogesic after lunch and, like a good little girl, stayed in bed.]

Right now, I’m planning to do oDesk work and add to Mackenzie. I want to finish him before I come back to Manila sana :)

Hay. I so love traveling. I wish I could do more of this.

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“When we heal the earth, we heal ourselves.” ~ David Orr

Don't forget Earth Hour tomorrow, March 27, 2010, 8:30 - 9:30 p.m. (Philippine Time). <3 our planet. It's the only one we've got. Good planets are hard to find ;)

Elise Goes to Apo Island

I love Apo Island. Ang sabi ni Jette, Apo Island = Paraiso. Tama siya.

Another long post. In English (haha baka basahin ni H, magreklamo). Picture(s) to follow siguro.

Photo from GoDumaguete.com

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Elise Goes to Bais

Jette and I went to Bais yesterday for whale- and dolphin-watching. But my two likes contradicted each other. I wanted waves, and I wanted to see dolphins. High waves meant no dolphins; and dolphins meant calm seas. We got calm seas yesterday, so we didn’t get to see dolphins.

Anyway, the trip wasn’t a total loss. I so loved the boat ride although Jette got seasick. We didn’t get to swim either because the waves were really high, and the currents were strong, plus it rained. Nagsama kasi kaming dalawang may balat! LOL

But we did get to go to the Mangrove Park where our guide, kuya Alex, showed us the trees and part of the island. He also said that the trees were planted so that when an typhoon comes, they could stop (or at least weaken) the storm before it makes landfall. Jette said it reminded her of the movies where giant alligators would suddenly jump out of the water to eat the unsuspecting actors in those bad animal attack movies. It actually does, except that the mangrove park has cleaner water and it isn’t in a swamp.

Mangrove Park

We also tried to go to the Manjuyod White Sand Bar where we could swim, but being the evil me, I let Jette jump into the water first. (Sorry, sweets.) She said it was too cold, and I could see that the currents were too strong, and I’m not much of a swimmer.

So they took us to Olympia, instead, which is one of the other islands in the Tañon Strait (I think). Kuya Alex said that most of the 600+ people living there are fishermen and they make a living by fishing, crabbing, and harvesting sea weed which they sell to be used to manufacture plastics. We also had lunch there, in a cottage on the sea. Ang babait ng tao, I swear.

Oh, oh, oh, kwento ko lang:

Kuya Alex: Punta tayo sa island, ma’am.
Me: Alin pong island?
Kuya Alex: *points* D’yan. ‘Yan ang Olympia. Ang mga tao dyan-
Me: Olympians?
Kuya Alex: *doesn’t hear* mga mangingisda.

Ala lang hehe Mana si Russel sa ‘kin.

We went home at around 3 p.m. After that, grocery, KFC then home where we collapsed.

Kuya Alex said to come back on April which is the best time for whale- and dolphin-watching. Why not ‘di ba?

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On Characters…

“Why wouldn’t you write to escape yourself
as much as you might write to express yourself.
It’s far more interesting to write about others.”

Susan Sontag

Paano ba kayo mag-develop ng characters? Base ba sa iyong pagkatao? Base sa pagkatao ng mga kilala ninyo? Base sa mga taong gusto niyong maging?

Kung ako kasi ang tatanungin, all three ‘yan. Ang isang character ni Elise Estrella, hero o heroine, ay base sa akin, sa pagkatao ng mga kaibigan ko at sa kung sino at ano ang gusto kong maging. Kung nabasa niyo naman ang mga gawa ko (kahit at least dalawa man lang), mapapansin niyong meron at merong pareho sa kanila. Malamang sa alamang, iyon ay ang personalidad na nakuha nila sa akin.

Ang challenge sa akin ay kung paano gawing iba-iba ang mga characters. Hindi maiiwasan na lahat sila ay katulad ko bilang ako ang writer nila. Pero sinusubukan kong bigyan ng ibang personality na unique sa kanila ang mga characters. Halimbawa, marami sa characters ko ang insecure. Insecure si Amerie dahil overweight siya. Iba ang insecurity niya kay Bethany na siya namang dumanas ng abusive childhood sa kamay ng kanyang tiyahin. Iba rin ang insecurity ni Joie (na makikilala niyo pa lang) dahil inabuso rin siya ng kanyang mga magulang. Sinubukan ko lang silang pag-iba-ibahin sa paraan ng pagbibigay ng iba-ibang background. Hindi lang iyon. Iba-iba rin ang paaraan ng pagiging insecure nila.

Marami rin akong iyakin na characters. Iyakin si Cassie, si Joie, si Bryce… okay lang ‘yon dahil iyakin din ako. Pero ang hindi maganda ay kung nagsimula ang libro na umiiyak sila, at natapos ang librong umiiyak pa rin sila. Para saan na sinulat ko ang story nila kung hindi sila magdedevelop at magiging mas mabuting tao sa huli?

Iyon ang naaalala kong natutunan ko sa English at writing classes no’ng bata ako. Ang mga characters ay hindi effective kung hindi sila mag-eevolve sa libro. Tao ang mga characters. Ang tao, nagbabago.

Most of the time, hindi ka magsusulat ng characters na alam mong hindi mo magugustuhan. Hindi ako marunong magsulat ng bidang malandi, dahil unang-una, ayoko ng malandi. Baka chapter two pa lang ako, patayin ko sa drug overdose o kaya sa STD ang haliparot na ‘yon. Pero somewhere out there, may reader na gusto niyang basahin ay happy-ever-after para sa isang character na malandi. Which is why ipapaubaya ko na lang sa ibang writer ang pagsusulat sa character na iyon.

Hindi ko rin masusulat ang isang character na hindi ko kilala. Kaya ako may Excel file kung saan nakalagay ang mga detalye ng buhay ng characters ko.

For example:

This is a picture of the files kept by Elise Estrella for the heroes of her Sentinels Series. The names and information here are purely fictional.

Sample of the Sentinels Files

Siguro may pagka-OC pero at least may guide ako sa kanila, at kilala ko sila. Alam ko ang gusto nila, ang ayaw nila, kung paano sila magre-react. Realistic sila in a way na alam ko kung paano magiging jologs ang isang Catholic school girl, o paano magiging iyakin ang isang miyembro ng 1st Special Forces Regiment ng Philippine Army.

Imposible bang maging iyakin ang sundalo? Of course not. Siguro katawa-tawa siyang hero pero imposibleng walang isang sundalo ang iyakin, romantic, mama’s boy o bading sa totoong buhay. Im.po.si.ble. Kung kaya’t hindi natin p’wedeng sabihin na hindi gagawin ng isang tao ang isang bagay. Sayang ang mga characters natin kung lilimitahan lang natin ang mga gusto nating ipagawa sa kanila dahil hindi tayo naniniwalang kaya iyong gawin ng ibang tao. Halimbawa, alam mong hindi mo gagawin ang mag-suicide. Por que ba hindi mo gagawin iyon, ibig na sabihin wala nang ibang taong nag-susuicide?

Puwes, realistic bang umiyak si Cameron na dating astig na Army Ranger? Bakit hindi? Dahil kung mahal niya si Mallory ng gaya ng sa gusto kong mahalin niya si Mallory, luluha siya ng dugo kung gusto ko siyang paluhain ng dugo.

Maging open-minded tayo. Huwag tayong magpakahon o manatili sa comfort zone. Madaming characters sa mundo ng isang writer. I-challenge natin ang sarili natin na isulat ang character na akala natin hindi natin kaya isulat *huwag ka kumaway d’yan, malandi ka* Sayang ang pagiging writer mo kung ikaw mismo lilimitahan mo ang sarili mo.

Hindi ko sinasabing magaling ako sa character development. I wish I were. Kapag binabasa ko ang mga libro ko minsan naiisip ko, ganito pa rin siya o ay, hindi ko masyadong na-develop. Hindi ako kuntento na iba-iba lang sila ng trabaho o iba-iba lang sila ng hilig, o iba-iba lang sila ng kwento. Gusto ko iba-iba sila ng ugali. Iba-iba sila mag-react. Iba-iba sila ng background. Kadalasan hindi ako successful sa pagsusulat ng mga ganoong uri ng characters kung kaya’t minsan frustrated ako. Pero at least sinusubukan ko, ‘di ba?

At sa 19.5 manuscripts naman na nasulat ko na, wish ko lang na sana naman may unique personality naman pala ang bawat isa sa mga tauhan ko.

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